Submering in twilight, the viking ship is dyed golden.
Viking ship is special for everyone, it's dangous, exciting, and it also is most of teenagers' dream.
Large and old sail means the viking ship has plenty expierence.
Large and old sail means the viking ship has plenty expierence.
For instance,
wars...
Beautiful fore signifies stateliness.
It's a good picture of the Viking Ship.
Becareful
回复删除1. "Submerging" and not "Submering"
2. Don't forget your "A" for Viking ship so it reads "A Viking ship"
3. "Dangerous" and not "dangous"
4. "experience" and not "expierence"
Becareful of your spelling and grammar!
Overall, a thoughtful entry! It sounds like a poem!
3/5